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 Hi guys,  I know I haven’t been very active here, but there’s a good reason. I’m in transition to a new to me logging site. Sense the domain hooked to this site does not run out for some months you will on occasion see a post here. To check out my new blog go to my author’s site link below.  bydoriselaine.com

A Poem of Thought

  Real Too Intense for Some


When giving to where one's real does come
For some to this hard to believe is true
Discovery of real too intense for some

To many a game in play to welcome
The few of real that never knew
When giving to where one's real does come

Excitement fuels their game of where they're from
That fizzles when to real it grew
Discovery of real too intense for some

Seen as boring when the game's not played
In sticking to one's faith to this one's way
When to real the foundation was laid

Standing firm to one's realness hard today
Because some see this too intense to deal
In silence one becomes known to their way

Their hearts are closed to that to feel
When giving to where one's real does come
One then does relax in God for zeal
Discovery of real too intense for some
      ©Doris Elaine

Thoughts: Many people play games these days in portraying un-realness because being real seems too intense for them. Many of these people get bored with real as they themselves would rather play than be real to the other. Of course real is intense because it's not fake nor a game in play. Am believing it takes a real man or women to recognize and appreciate one that is real. And takes one that is real in dealing with the intensity of real. In being real if you find yourself being denied or cast aside, don't sweat it, just continue to be real to yourself and in God's eyes. Sooner or later one will come along that appreciates the intensity of your realness because in a world of fake or pretend real can be too intense for some. 

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